Congrats on the first, dollface. Admerably captures an artist's simultanious ostentation and low self esteem.
Congrats on the first, dollface. Admerably captures an artist's simultanious ostentation and low self esteem.
You and your big words, missy.
hehe, it's funny cause it's so relatable. Good sense of rhythm.
Life of an animator, amiright?
Tee hee
I like the Joke's timing. The rough style works I think, but you gotta really sell it with the Voice-work..... I like the nonchalant thing for the gag but it's almost too restrained too much of the time. (Let loose and just adjust your mic down if your blowing it out with a real yell). As for the visuals, Maybe try to very your blocking (Most of it was in Mid-shot off below the knee)
Thanks, this has been very helpful =]
So really what you're saying is, just try to make it more casual? And possibly a few different camera angles?
I'll make sure to improve in the next episode ^_^
Rock on
An absolute Gas. Animation's rough, but the retro gaming feel allows that to work to your advantage. Fudge with the timing of movements, maybe push the gaming thing even further, If I had to offer advice. But other than that, Class act, sugar. Love your cuts.
Heh, why thank you. Yeah, the gaming thing was going to be pushed more in the next episode; the music was actually going to go hand-in-hand with what the video game theme of the next episode was going to be. This one works with it more or less, but the next episode was going to be kind of a direct reference to a specific game series, whereas this one was just them running around and Sonic music went with it.
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Makes for a good opening I reckon
Splendid timing. makes mee want to watch it as a cartoon (or read it's comic)
Keep up the good work, lovie.
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I must say the adio work is fantastic!
Magnificent
edge of my seat the whole time!
Oooo!
What a gloriously surreal piece!
thx :)
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